A recipe of Me

Mix with devil

Add a sprinkle of fun

A touch of evil

Reversed by the sun

Allowing to stand

Add a grain of golden sand

A passion fruit peeled

Then your kiss that's been sealed.

Set for an hour

Stir in a magenta coloured flower 

Pick a star from the sky

As a topping for your eye.

Dished up with heat

Tasting Savoury and Sweet

Add magic from the sea

That's how you make me. 

Reviews

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... jesus!!! ... it is only sometimes that one is so startled by sparkling talent ... that one smiles an unending mile-long smile ... which says ... may the universe of verse remain as sublime and as volatile and as razor sharp and as fragrant ... yet i shall dare to tell you my favourite lines ... though only after reiterating that this is a startling masterpiece ... and those exotic lines are ... "a touch of evil" ... "reversed by the sun" ... "then your kiss that's been sealed" ... and this entire eclectic third stanza ... and ... "add magic from the sea" ... i can tell you that i've never read anything like this ... i can tell you also that i never will ... and i can tell you that no one who reads this is ever going to forget it ... a 100 ... to thank you for writing this and then sharing it ... :) ...

[SamBug]

Ha. ha. This was so cute. I liked it a lot.

[Shamrock]

I love it. You give a light and happy view of life. Keep it up

[Chris Lotus]

A very creative way of explaining your personality. I find the concept of expressing your different features in the manner of ingredients in a recipie to connect exceptionally well.

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a great poem to explain your personality. The flow is easy to follow and the description is wonderful

[Charles]

And bold enough to change the rhyming pattern between stanzas 1 & 2, and also to rhyme evil with devil. Good recipe.

[jeff hackworth]

i've never seen a poem like this one, great job.

[Tate Morgan]

That is so cool I loved it It was special
Tate

[HoWiE]

I tell you what... I'm not a big fan of poetry... but I really like this. Everything flows nicely, it's sort of reminds me of a Vanessa Carlton or a Colbie Callait type lyric. There's a lot of great lines in here and I think it works really well.
Nice one!
Howie ;)