Silenced screams

Silenced screams

A Poem by S.W.
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Domestic violence. Domestic violence in the UK stats show that one woman every 5 seconds is a victim to this abuse. Yet its still a 'non talked' about subject.

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The shouts and screams
 makes the silence so loud
A monster, an ogre
He stands so proud.

Lifting his hand
 to a sting on her face
she cries out loud
 but silence is placed. 

He's sorry through smiles
 She's weakened by pain.
No tears can be heard
but pouring rain.

The ogre has left
 And the demons have gone
 This once beautiful lady
 has nothing to mourn.

A shadow now is
 of this once gallant lady
clutching her stomach
 where once was her baby.

The screams that echoed inside her head
are now silenced outside

As she lay there

 Dead
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© 2010 S.W.


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Sad poem. Gotta say you talented. Talented indeed. I enjoyed this write. Good job.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is really good. I like the way you wrote the tale... very sad.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Powerful and heart wrenching piece. Unfortunately this is a problem all over the world. Abusers not only torture their victims, the manipulate them as well. This causes the victim to believe that they do not deserve any better or, at the very least, defenseless to stop it.
Thank you for sharing this piece.

Posted 14 Years Ago


intense and powerful , well written

Posted 14 Years Ago


Absolutely Amazing! Reading this I felt a stab in my heart when I read the line "Lifting his hand to a sting on her face," Any man that would hit a woman is not a man, you are right a monster. Thank you so much for posting a great poem on such a important subject!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Haunting and chilling but a wonderful piece. You tackled a touchy subject and in my opinion wrote about it perfectly. It chilled me and it was so intense. Brilliant.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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S.W.
S.W.

London, Kent, United Kingdom



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