Lady bug

A poem i made,its read like a sing song sorta.

LADYBUG
by:Cherie Paregrine Isis

I wanna LADYBUG,so
soft and sweet as my heart

She's got to have a buzz
that softens my emotions

To travel around the
world,and see all the
oceans.

Oh why,Why can't
i get a LADYBUG?So
bright and red.
With black spots all round the head!

Oh i wanna LADYBUG,
so soft and sweet as my heart!

Author's Note

I love lady bugs!Its told thru an innocent child's heart/mind.Does it show?
please comment and rate!I really love reviews!I learn and read!

Reviews

[deeps]

Ah! This is just so wonderful and so sweet. Very well written as well!