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Looking through the frosty window

From behind an invisible painted mask

Darkened eyes tighten and close

At the thought of secrets nobody knows

In the eyes of a young girl

One who's felt the pain

She learns not to trust anyone 

Learns how to sustain

So alone in the world

No matter whose watching

Other methods are used

To keep her from talking

A day comes when its all just too much

She reaches out, to fall into your touch

Slipped right between your fingers

Fell deep into the ground

It was so much easier

When no one was around

Reviews

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Oohh, this is your best one yet, and the flow just doesn't get much better than that. I like the abrupt ending, like you were about to tell us something but chose to just leave it at that. I like it a lot a lot a lot (:

[Peter Joseph Swanson]

Very good!