{chirp.chirp.chirp}

. . .

ramble on my little bird

longing for your words to be heard

chirp away your lovely thoughts

singing songs so absurd

yet do not fret

not with me my dear

they are not wasted, your songs

to me they are precious to my ear

so let others pass by

not hearing, as they walk way

for i choose to close my eyes

listening to you chirp all day

. . .

Reviews

[Kane Hagwood]

*Dramatic running*
I'm here! I'm here!
*ahem*
*Inhale*

.... Okay, no jokes, really. This is a wonderful poem, and I'm glad you decided to publicly show it. I know you've already heard me rave about how much I enjoy this piece, but everything it embodies is so charming and comforting. And into my favorites it goes~

Oh, and before I forget, without a shadow of a doubt, you and your writing are always a wonderful addition to my day. I'd even go far as to say.... THOU ART BUSSIN'!!!!!!

Told you I would say it ;)
Wonderful work as always, Lav ^_^

[living lavender]

you undoubtably are a man of your word.
hahaha!! your review put a smile on my face. :)
thank you thy good sir. your carrier pigeon of good fortune was graciously received. *deep bow*
{no one can call you a liar. lol}

[Kane Hagwood]

I do what I can to stay true to my word :) That, and the work is truly bussin, for sure, sire. Also, I JUST realized I didn't put this in my favorites >:( I swore I did already, then checked, and it wasn't. Well, so much for me being a man of my word. Good thing I noticed. I wanna make sure I hold onto this poem, because it really is a wonderful piece with the inspiration being close to home.

[Chris]

Takes time and heart to "listen", there are so many, many "little birds" out here.

[living lavender]

i completely agree.
{thank you for your review once again.}

[The Unknown Sith]

Nice I like this it has a good flow.

[living lavender]

thank you very much.
{i appreciate your review.}

[Matthew Kult]

Charmingly sweet. Cutely delicate.

Great read

With love

Matthew

[living lavender]

i appreciate your feedback. as always.
{thank you for your kind words.}

[June bug]

This is a wonderful write, enjoyed this, love the poetic feel of it,

[living lavender]

thank you for your sweet words once more.
{welcome to come on by any time.}

[Chris Shaw]

Ah the chirp of bird song on an early morning. Nothing sweeter. Sadly some don’t even notice. A cute poem.

Chris

[living lavender]

thank you for such a sweet review.
{i appreciate your kindness.}

[not your muse]

wow, this one is my fav, so far :)

[living lavender]

thank you. it was so much fun to write.
came to me all at once. flowing effortlessly.
{this one comes from the heart.}