{mentally naked}

~

lost in my own words

you watch me as i write

silently hidden in the shadows

filled with pure delight

i do not notice your presence

my fingers keep their pace

i am in a word-like trance

you enjoy watching my face

your feet move on their own free will

my eyes glued to the screen

you watch my soul come to life

like something you've never seen

you lace your arms around me

pulling my focus towards your face

whispering such honesty

claiming me with your embrace

~

Reviews

[Planet x]

I love this one , I think that its my favorite,
You expressed your emotions so beautifully,
Feels like reached a peacful place, letting your lover to watch you writing could be very intimate
As you called it, you were mentally naked
You deserve to be on top of the writing list and all

[living lavender]

exactly the feeling i was attempting to portray. you grasped it perfectly.
thank you for such sweet words.
{like honey.}

[Writergurl]

I really like this especially your last stanza, so nicely written, creative too.

[living lavender]

thank you for your feedback.
i appreciate you stopping by beautiful.

[Stu. T.H.]

An inspiring and wholesome work, author living lavender. The fluency of the pacing and the gentle description is entrancing, it makes the poem so very inviting. It is a short but straightforward and cute read, and I do have a bias for such work, so thank you for sharing your work, author living lavender. It was a delight.

[living lavender]

thank you for such kind words.
i am very proud of this one.
{looking forward to sharing more.}

[Arundass TP]

Excellent writing. Enjoyed reading 👍

[living lavender]

thank you very much.
i appreciate the feedback.

[Kane Hagwood]

This feels like such a perfect title to a poem. The feeling of sinking into your own work, your own world, is nothing that can ever be explained. And this poem also really feels like it rings true to this platform. We've had our talks on it, so I think you understand. Every line in this piece strikes a note without falter or reservation. In itself, writing is essentially just showing nudes of your soul, to anyone clever enough to toss aside the unintentional lines of wisdom and red herrings. This is going to my favorites :)

[living lavender]

thank you for taking the time to review this one.
i am super excited to share it.
"showing nudes of your soul"
{literal poetry.}

[Matthew Kult]

Charmingly distracted, surprisingly embraced. Lovely write and read.

With love

Matthew

[living lavender]

thank you my friend. this one brought joy to create.
{again. appreciative as always.}