{2.17.23}

the mint on your lips taste so good

refreshing my tongue each kiss

inhaling our lust each gasp for air

addicted to the pull you have on me

- if only i knew where your lips have been.

Reviews

[Kane Hagwood]

In addition to the last line, "If only I knew what your lips have SAID." This short poem as a powerful contrast to it. Holding your loved one dear, with the moment feeling perfect....

Only to find out the truth later that would shatter those memories. Make you question what was real and what wasn't. Or, who those lips were with.

Lovely little poem you've penned here, and I look forward to more in the future :)

[living lavender]

mhmmm...i honestly like that add.
it continues the theme of wonder. {good or bad.}
read moremhmmm...i honestly like that add.
it continues the theme of wonder. {good or bad.}

exactly! that insecure part no one wants to speak about. yet. everyone has felt it in one way or another. that second guessing. if what was yours. is truly yours.

thank you for your feedback.

[AaronCZim]

Mint is a kiss of it's own. The fragrance carries. Cool idea!

[living lavender]

'a kiss of mint'
i like that a lot. thank you for your review.

[not your muse]

this is one of your masterpieces till now after "Your Muse".

[living lavender]

thank you.
your kind words flatter me.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

such an artful last line...

[living lavender]

much appreciated.

[Chris Shaw]

Your brevity is excellent. So much said here. Those desires can take over. I think I would want to know much more here before pursuing further. Get to know his mind and what’s in it if you want those kisses to last. Lovely piece.


Chris

[living lavender]

thank you once again.
i appreciate you. and your perspective.

[Stu. T.H.]

The work exhibit great desires through wonderful imagery, but that last line is... ominous. I truly do not wanna know where those lips have been.
Thank you for sharing your work, author Living Lavender.

[living lavender]

thank you for your perspective.
i appreciate your reply.

[Arundass TP]

Oh. Feeeelings are high. Great

[living lavender]

thank you.
i appreciate your words as well.

[Matthew Kult]

Sweetly suffering, needing a kiss to grasp that lustful high.

Great read

With love

Matthew

[living lavender]

thank you.
i appreciate your poetic reply.

[Planet x]

Beautiful , the contrast between the sweet words of the stanz to the last line
Sweetness against fear

[living lavender]

the true nature of a yearning comedown. after a lustful high.
the ultimate poetic justice.read morethe true nature of a yearning comedown. after a lustful high.
the ultimate poetic justice.
{maybe. maybe not.}