{celestial dissolution}

{celestial dissolution}

A Poem by living lavender
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{10.04.22}

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the stars don't love me like they use to - 
for this i am truly sad.

they were once my friends. 
my companions. my escape.

for i wrote them songs. danced beneath their light.
told them my secrets. giving them my heart.

was that not enough?
and yet they don't even remember my name.

nay, i am now as they are - 
nameless. floating. 

i too will one day burn into nothing.
leaving dust in place of my final breath.

if only love were enough for the stars -
oh, how i loved them.

© 2023 living lavender


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if only love were enough for the stars

nay I am now as they are nameless floating

super love those lines!
such a pleasing poem to read this morning I also could write about the stars and night I I love as well
eros will light up at night under those stars

thank you for this lovely write and giving inspiration



Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

living lavender

11 Months Ago

thank you for your feedback.
i love when others have favorite lines they connect with.
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Heartbreakingly poetic, Beautifully written. Love the structure.

Wonderful read.

With love

Matthew

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

living lavender

11 Months Ago

appreciate the kind words.
thank you for your feedback.
{always grateful.}

if only love were enough for the stars

nay I am now as they are nameless floating

super love those lines!
such a pleasing poem to read this morning I also could write about the stars and night I I love as well
eros will light up at night under those stars

thank you for this lovely write and giving inspiration



Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

living lavender

11 Months Ago

thank you for your feedback.
i love when others have favorite lines they connect with.
.. read more
this is heart-tugging really, as well as beautiful too,
very nicely written. Enjoyed the read.
keep writing always.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

living lavender

11 Months Ago

thank you once again.
your words are too kind.
Writergurl

11 Months Ago

You write really well. No problem at all. I am enjoying your writes.
living lavender

11 Months Ago

you shower me with such kindness.
thank you isn't enough.
i look forward to reading yo.. read more
Beautiful poem! I love your comparison of yourself with the stars, I have the same love for the moon. A really nice read.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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living lavender

11 Months Ago

thank you for your kind words beautiful.

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Added on December 2, 2023
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