{Your Muse}

do you hear that?

as the piano plays

each key being sought out

        WANTED
        NEEDED

in their own way

for a purpose

to become whole

                           in song...

- i wish to be chosen in the same manner.

Reviews

[Matthew Kult]

To be touched gently softly while creating something magical. Lovely write and read.

With love

Matthew

[living lavender]

thank you for your kind words Matthew.
{you are welcome by anytime.}

[June bug]

This is simply unique, I like this, it is cleverly & creatively written

[living lavender]

thank you for your kind words beautiful.
{stop by any time.}

[John the Baptist]

Perhaps becoming whole is the desire of all of us in one way or another. Interesting the way the speaker likens himself to the piano keys. Yes, being wanted and needed is the ideal, but staying that way is the test.

[living lavender]

staying that way is hard. for every song has different keys specifically chosen. but sometimes people change the tune without telling the other.
{thank you for your kind words. as always.}

[Arundass TP]

Beautiful poem. Well-done.

[living lavender]

thank you :)
{much appreciated.}

[Perdition]

Oh wow! Now this one's both surprising and wonderfully very snappy and quite cool~
A very unique and wonderful twist on what I thought was going to be a sadder turn on this piano gig and poen, but you gave it a very respectable, ablet hinting towards the sad land, but not if you read it with a Merry mind and tank us all for being poets right? To the ones that come to the to page to spill and give!! Really enjoyed this one...thanks for sharing it and Merry Christmas!

[living lavender]

thank you for such kind words.
stop by any time :)
{merry christmas}

[Perdition]

Absolutely! Happy Holidays to you~

[Soren]

This poem gives new meaning to the word chosen. It is intriguing and deserves a good deal of thought, all besides the thought or romance that it portrays. Lovely

[living lavender]

i appreciate your review.
thank you :)
{merry christmas}

[Masked writer]

Though short, I love it. Many words of wisdom in such a short story. WELL DONE!

[living lavender]

thank you for YOUR kind words.
i appreciate the feedback.
{happy you enjoyed this one.}

[Masked writer]

No worries!

[Chris Shaw]

Not just a few random notes, you wish to be known for all the black and white ivory and ebonies and who can blame you. Loved for your flaws as well as your successes. My thoughts entirely. All or nothing.

Chris

[living lavender]

i love your perspective on my words. beautiful.
thank you.

[Chris Shaw]

You are most welcome:)

[Kane Hagwood]

I remember going through a period in life where this feeling seemed to be the overarching theme. Everyone person seemed to be a note in a song, having their own place, harmonizing. It made me question where my place was in the song, wishing I too would be swept away in the melody and find my place.

Now I feel a bit different. I've had to create my own songs, with the right people finding their way to my melody, who then are able to share there's--whole and complete as they are. But I love this, and understand the powerful longing emotions this piece has. Well done :)

[living lavender]

the bigger picture you created was a complete new perspective for me.
my small mind created this with intent. want. longing to be loved. chosen. by just one person. {to be accepted. admired for who i was. who i am.}
you took this beyond. placing purpose within life and living as a whole. fascinating.

[Kane Hagwood]

Nah, I don't think you have a small mind. I think you have a creative mind that had a direct focus on something, and I just happened to have my own spin on it. But yeah, you really did sum up my perspective on it. I guess that's just how I've felt after my many adventures. And misadventures haha.

[living lavender]

thank you

[living lavender]

every time i type a response it is deleted. fml.

[Kane Hagwood]

At least I finally saw your comment on my comment. 3 weeks later. Thanks Writers Cafe! Ha! I might have saw this one already, but was looking through your old work, and felt a little bad I never said anything. Assuming I did see this?.... ugh.... everything has been a weird soup of time lately.

[living lavender]

grab a bowl and pick your favorite flavor!! :P lol
{no worries

[living lavender]

} oops. lol