Ov Obsession and the Void

Sense of sight, the mind well-wrought

Images infiltrate, cerebral cortex besought

Vile venom forcefully fed, dark disturbances draught

Sweven slithering sullies, ill intuition illuminates thought

Coltish canker convey, host heedless in distraught

Living lunacy lavishing, lief lead the onslaught

The ancient ambiguously abide, screaming silence now bought

Obliviously obeisant, baldric lost, battles never fought

Relentless reality reveals, reveries revel in fraught

Will wallow in woe, two twisted truths taught

Macabre mask of malcontent, quintessence quadrennially waught

Flesh fading forby, lifeblood, tunic of time now sought

Cold cadaver come, emit the ancient thy clock counts naught

Author's Note

Looking for brutally honest reviews, don't hold back I can take it.

Reviews

[Mockingbird]

conveys disillusionment and despair. the language illustrates personal feelings and makes it relatable. i like the use of alliteration. excellent job.

[LivingLament]

I thank you for your most kind words.