:'(

:'(

A Poem by LivingDeath

I wish that I could write again
the way I used to do,
pen a thousand memories
and tell my love for you,
but time has come to bitter end
inspiration dead and gone,
you used to be my biggest dream
but now I can't go on....

© 2012 LivingDeath


Author's Note

LivingDeath
I'm sorry to all the friends that actually follow my writing. I havent written in a long time due to some things going on right now. I've had a lack of inspiration these last few weeks (as the reason why I wrote this poem about it). I hope to write more regularly.

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You've written with incredible sensitivity a poem that has a universality, not that I'm at all saying that any of us could fully comprehend what it is that drove you to write the poem, but I can say with confidence that the fundamental feeling you've put into it touches anyone who reads it, thank you and well done x


Posted 12 Years Ago


Sometimes the most heartfelt write is sitting in there waiting to be looked at beyond the block. Well written.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Great write:) I hope all is going well... very sad:( Good luck with your complications... same here for me 2:( havent wrote in like forever... Keep up the good work though:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


A sad poem. When we read a dead-end. Hard to rebirth love. I like the honest and direct words in this poem. A strong ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


This piece is completely true. After a certain time period, the strength to pull forth certain emotions that relate to a certain thing fades eventually. I love it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I haven't written in the longest time, was sort of bored with the site, but I'm back. This is the first poem I've read, its short but great, delivers the message.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Same problem here man... F*****g annoying, but yeah greatly written really. Msg me if you wanna talk man! (:

Posted 12 Years Ago


I always love your writing . Cheer up , and keep the writing coming . (:

Posted 12 Years Ago


you did a good job on this and im sorry for whatevers going on for you i will be praying and i really like this very good job =)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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LivingDeath
LivingDeath

Abbotsford, British Columbia, Canada



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