(Not) Perfect

I hate that things are different

why can't they be the same,

I try to say I'm sorry

but you just think it's a game.

I can write a thousand stories

to say my love for you,

but a million pages later

there's still no love you too.

I can sing a perfect memory

that can make a teardrop cry,

I want the perfect melody 

that will make the teardrops dry.

I wish a perfect felony 

to steal one final kiss,

before I leave in memory

that white yet black abyss. 

I hate that things are different

why can't they be the same,

I try to say I'm sorry..

I know that I'm to blame...

Reviews

[Sleeping Maiden]

Gosh, amazing piece. I love it. Your poetry captures emotions so well, your readers can relate! This is quite strong and you know it's hard to have regret in our lives. But mistakes happen.. we do learn and sometimes forgiveness from that person we want to be back with is really hard. Great poem that reveals a life lesson! Thank you for sharing.

[Alana McGuire]

I can definitely relate to this. Sometimes it's really hard to let go and move on.
I really like the meotion you put into this and the way it flows.

[Lily Mae]

When changes begins it's so hard and yet it takes us to better places with one another if we allow growth to take place..xx

[xXxCynicalWarsxXx]

Written profoundly and the feelings swelled into me, creating a fear like no other, but an understanding that creates a mess of myself. This was well done, powerful and well put together. Great write!

[nevermindfan1991]

This poem is well written and great rhyme scheme. The tone is also what makes it shine. Young, confused person who is trying to ask for forgiveness and deep affection from their significant another. Great Job!

[stars are far]

This was perfect..
I loved it so much ...great work :)