(Not) Perfect

I hate that things are different

why can't they be the same,

I try to say I'm sorry

but you just think it's a game.

I can write a thousand stories

to say my love for you,

but a million pages later

there's still no love you too.

I can sing a perfect memory

that can make a teardrop cry,

I want the perfect melody 

that will make the teardrops dry.

I wish a perfect felony 

to steal one final kiss,

before I leave in memory

that white yet black abyss. 

I hate that things are different

why can't they be the same,

I try to say I'm sorry..

I know that I'm to blame...

Reviews

[Sleeping Maiden]

Gosh, amazing piece. I love it. Your poetry captures emotions so well, your readers can relate! This is quite strong and you know it's hard to have regret in our lives. But mistakes happen.. we do learn and sometimes forgiveness from that person we want to be back with is really hard. Great poem that reveals a life lesson! Thank you for sharing.

[Jessie]

Heartfelt and sad..flowed together nicely I enjoyed the read as I always do..tc

[(Super) Heroes Never Di..]

This is where Im at in my life. Poetry is supposed to evoke feeling and make you think, and you've done that here. Beautiful.

[Luciole]

I cant explain how much I love this poem. It actually chronicles what has recentely happened with me and an old friend. Really moving read.

[Corkee1808]

This is absolutely amazing I almost started to cry because it had so much meaning

[fernii]

Very good :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful and sad poem. Regret leave us wishing for thing lost and can't be found again. Forgiveness is hard to find sometime. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Corkee1808]

I really like this. Great poem!

[Tainted Devotion]

Very relatable like the others have already said. I felt the deep emotions that you played inton this. Sometimes it is really hard to let go and just move on. Change is a scary thing for some people. Very nicely done.

[Scars and Souvenirs]

I can relate to this. You did a great job. :)