Tear in the Rain

We've been waiting two years

the fights and the tears,

I know I'm not perfect 

it's one of my fears. 

The fear that I'll lose you

the fear that it's true,

please don't give up

I know we'll pull through. 

I'm sorry I'm pain

just a tear in the rain,

but baby I love you

I can't lose you again. 

I wish you were here

now year after year,

I want to stop dreaming

and just hold you near. 

Feel your heart beat

as toes tickle your feet,

watch your eyes shine

a smile; complete. 

My dreams are just dreams

help me find what they mean,

I'm tired of one day

it's getting obscene.

I just want your touch

your love is enough,

I can't take all the waiting

I miss you so much. 

Reviews

[Mistaken]

Awwww

[Stormy Weather]

Very relateable, and very full of emotion! I love it.

[fernii]

Good poem, very emotional :)

[Sharkapillar]

I love you. :)
I miss you too.

[Winters_Lost_Walk]

This is beautiful =) I love it, it's heartfelt, raw and full of emotions. The feeling of missing is real and it is easily shown by your choice of words. Nice work =)

[Black Swan Poetry]

writing what many have felt. Keep it up!

[Coyote Poetry]

A strong poem of missing and yearning for someone. I could feel the desire and sadness in the words. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[xXxCynicalWarsxXx]

very well written. The flow is never ending, even as your eyes turn away from the words, the emotions continue to flow through. I loved it. Felt each word down to the core.
100/100

[DearSweetAgony]

Very well written, the flow of this story did not stop flowing. But I am not the least bit surprised. Flawless write, keep up the good work!

[DreyaArt]

well written, even if i cant relate personally i know people who are in the same boat and i am very sorry that you are hurting. and i wish i could say that im here for you, but i cant relate so..i dont think id be much help.