Die For You

If you're going to fall;

let me fall for you..

If you're going to bleed;

let me bleed for you.

If you're going to hurt,

let me hurt for you..

But if you're going to live;

let me die for you. 

Author's Note

Re read it a couple times. Can mean a few things.

Reviews

[Mistaken]

awestriking!

[Luciole]

You know that saying, big things come in small packages? Well that's what came to mind when I read this poem. So much emotion in a mere 8 lines. Amazing write
:)

[Stormy Weather]

This has so much meaning packed into only a few lines. Quite a beautiful work of art. :)

[Seshat Nidaba]

Just what I expected from a poet called LivingDeath, sometimes pain glows better than love, though I suspect this kind of pain is for love. Great piece though, sharp and sweet - and the note of sacrifice for love is so what us poets are all about. We make the best martyrs!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

This is incredibly beautiful and deeply meaningful, well done Poet.

[fernii]

Wow, even though it is a short poem its quite meaningful. It describes exactly how i am with people. Great poem :)

[Lily Mae]

Oh I do love this.. yes and yes.. :)

[Lexy]

I LOVE this! good job. it can be dark if thats the way you read it, but it can also be a sweet way to say I love you.

[Kaelyn Shea]

I love this. It really shows that when you really truely are in love you would do anything for that person. Taking away their pain so they dont have to feel that pain. Even if that means dying just so they can continue living.
Amazing write really.