A Suicide Note

Will you cry for me

will you cry when I am gone,

I know this time will hurt you

but I know you'll carry on.

My life is but a shadow

in a graveyard late at night,

I try to stop the razor

but it's just not worth the fight.

I tried so many years

to pretend that all was fine,

I may not know the future

but I know that it's my time.

I'm sorry to my brothers

I wish to watch you grow,

I love you with my life

but now I have to go. 

Author's Note

Please dont send me a bunch of messages asking if Im alright. Im fine. I write to get it off my chest so I dont actually let the words overtake me.

Reviews

[DreyaArt]

well that was...depressing..but i understand whatcher sayin.
all words are said already so... cheers
Drey

[Tainted Devotion]

Suicide is something that I've had to overcome in my life. Your poem hit it home for me, and touched my soul in ways I didn't think possible before. You are very gifted in poetry. You are truly amazing. I could relate to this very much, and found that it pulled me right in. A truly amazing job.

[Coyote Poetry]

Suicide is a bad subject for me. Few people leave notes. Most folks just give up and find a escape. The poem told a real story. Some people are less hard and the world can overtake them. I like the ending. I wonder what is the last thoughts of someone closing their eyes for the last time? A interesting poem. Suicide just leave a bush of people hurt and confused. Thank you for the thought provoking poem.
Coyote

[Lily Mae]

You expressed the emotions of suicide very well.. Great write...x

[Dahlia Phoenix]

Suicide is the number one enemy of sanity that we all perceive. It makes you feel like the world doesn't care about your troubles and everything is crumbling before your eyes. This was a sad piece and it takes you to a realm of darkness where one can't escape. Great piece.

[Thr!ve]

We love it! i cried. (its not funny either. :))

[Lexy]

Good job. i would so cry if that really happened

[Kaelyn Shea]

This is really an awesome write. :) Thanks for sharing

[Winters_Lost_Walk]

I actually really like this writing. The feelings are so real and truly felt. Nice write =]

[xXxCynicalWarsxXx]

The feelings swell, and the fact remains that you let them go. This is well. This is neat. Getting things out is what is needed, then so be it. Nicely done!