Kill Me Please, Kill Me Now

Don't feed me lines of empty truth

the lies that poison ears of youth,

you play the heart that loved you true

and now whats next is all for you. 

You fed me lies like truth was wrong

not one day passed, you don't belong, 

why I stay? I do not know

never will my heart be whole. 

Kill me, kill me, kill me please

thats all I ask, I want release,

kill me, kill me, kill me now

if you wont, I'll show you how. 

Take that knife and slit my throat

watch it bleed and watch me choke,

I'm done with life and all you're s**t

once I die you wont be missed.

You left behind a broken heart

and memories I wish were true,

I never wanted memories

I only wanted you. 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Last lines is a emotion. Most of us will know and understand. Easy to get lost in memories and thoughts. Hard to face a day alone.
"I'm done with life and all you're s**t
once I die you wont be missed."
Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Dahlia Phoenix]

Dark and potentially giving to the thought of death claiming them. A broken heart is hard to mend but when its broken beyond repair, its like a knife piercing repeatedly. Lies aren't helpful and the fact that they wanted for that other to understand how they felt...makes it hard. Great poem.

[Tainted Devotion]

Dark and incredibly moving. Pulled me in right until the very end. Loved the dark imagery. The last stanza was my favorite. Keep it up.

[Sarusai Hiryu]

Something savage, and none the worse for that.

[Brianna Brie]

You left behind a broken heart
and memories I wish were true,
I never wanted memories
I only wanted you.

That's what I am talking about blood and guts! Lots of feeling in this poem. Enjoyed the read.