Barely Breathing

There's pain in the healing

the cuts and the bleeding,

with a broken heart I'm living

but still I'm barely breathing. 

No time can fix my heart

and your lies have done their part,

the words that made me smile

now tear my world apart.

And I want to hold you close

hold that love I loved the most,

but you destroyed the man I used to be

and left me with the ghost.

And though there's pain in healing

the endless cuts and bleeding,

with a broken heart I'm living

my life will not stop breathing.

Author's Note

Wrote this on the 15 minute bus ride home. I know its not great but I just had to get it off my chest.

Reviews

[trippy kitty]

This was really great. I loved it actually. I could relate a lot.
Good job.