Fall For You

Stand atop the world with me

and take my weary heart, 

hold my love against your chest

feel it pulse beneath the dark. 

 

Stars may fall amongst the sky

like the way I fell for you,

but stars will never shine as bright

as what we know is true.

 

I miss you when I lay alone

when I dream beneath the sky,

I may not know the future

but I know we'll never die. 

Reviews

[Inyourshadow]

Love the ending, let fall those stars for who needs stars when one has a true loves eyes to gaze upon. Beautifully romantic sentiments throughout. Keep em' coming

[stars are far]

This was so amazing i loved it a lot :D
great work :)

[DreyaArt]

beautiful poem ty, well done :) keep writing. Only use your true emotions, they seem to give you the best writes.

[donny ingraham]

sweet and gentle

[Lily Mae]

I love this.. so pure and gentle..xx

[Desmund Tiny]

a heartfelt poem.... so sweet and it reminds me of the one I love..... ^^, very beautiful...thanks for sharing...

[Tainted Devotion]

Very beautiful. It was very heartfelt and made me smile a lot. Made me think of someone I really care about....very nicely done....you really are quite talented...

[Tasha]

I really liked this. The ending really brought it all together. Great write.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and positive poem. When we find paradise and peace with someone in a life. Best days of a life. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote