Fall For You

Stand atop the world with me

and take my weary heart, 

hold my love against your chest

feel it pulse beneath the dark. 

 

Stars may fall amongst the sky

like the way I fell for you,

but stars will never shine as bright

as what we know is true.

 

I miss you when I lay alone

when I dream beneath the sky,

I may not know the future

but I know we'll never die. 

Reviews

[(Super) Heroes Never Di..]

Words cannot describe how much I truly love this. This is amazing. Honestly. I wish I had something like this.

[Luciole]

this was so cute. really great job, 'tis a beautiful write :)

[Liz]

awh, I just love this. very beautiful!

[Jeff Brown]

The rythm and imagery give this a great feel.

[Kiri Nells]

There's an innocent, childish feel to this poem-- while at the same time it's understandable and beautiful relating to all people. That's something to be proud of, the ability to do that. Much enjoyed the rhythm! I read it a few times and it got better with each go-through. Love it!
Thanks for sharing!

[sarah]

this is a fantastic write! you are very talented, and this flows just beautifully thanks for sharing!

[the in between]

I liked the beat of words :) great job on the romance aspect too.

[Liza]

imagery waved into the intense emotions of the unlimited love felt - enjoyed.

[RJM]

That hit a chord for me. Beautiful so beautiful thank you for this

[Balls:)]

this is really beautiful :)