Just Some Words

Some people believe in love at first sight

well what about sight of first love?

First true love I mean.

I've gone my whole life trying

just trying to be a nice guy,

but so far its just been that ole cliche line

"nice guys finish last". 

I've been used, cheated on, lied to

basically everything you can imagine. 

Then I met her.

Those perfect ice blue eyes,

five little black freckles in her iris.

Those eyes that could look through my stone walls

to see the broken man on the inside.

I would think to myself

should I be this happy,

I don't deserve this.

My past is that of rebellion

a lost cause who was addicted to drugs,

a suicidal drop out failure.

She was the opposite.

Graduated from school with honors,

no cutting, no drugs, 

perfect.

Why should I be so happy

I would ask myself that over and over.

I liked her from the first day I saw her,

standing there in the doorway,

a small smile on her face.

The first time I held her in my arms I knew.

Some people believe in love at first sight

well what about sight of first love?

First true love I mean.

What we have is different,

it feels real.

I have never felt this trust,

never felt what I'm feeling right now.

I've never been able to trust anybody before,

but for some reason it's different with her,

I trust her with my life.

I know

she would never do anything to hurt me,

I can feel her love upon me.

When her heart beats against mine

everything else in the world melts away,

leaving just her and I

there in that moment,

that one perfect moment.

My heart may be

tattered and bruised,

scarred and cracked,

but it's hers now.

I don't have to tell her to treat it right

because I know she will.

I Love Her.

Author's Note

Just writing about what is on my heart. I know I kinda went on a rant but I needed to keep going with it. Just had to get it out. Into the universe I guess you could say. If you read all the way through it, I thank you.

Reviews

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Beautiful!

[Calypso]

I wish you the best of luck. I hope you will one day express your emotions.

[DreyaArt]

awe, you did it! lol, ok first off...nice guys dont finish last, they just happen to finish behind the meanies, but that means the meanies got all the other meanies so whats left are the people who matter.
You arent broken, just alittle hurt, vulnerable and completely lovable :) perhaps at one time you were broken, but what pain you feel in your soul is just a bruising of the cracks that are healing.
and trust me when i say i am nowhere near perfect you just dont know my whole story yet :)
and dont worry your heart is beautiful, a little worn perhaps but we can shine that up nicely :D
I Love you to

[Becky C Strukamp]

I love the way you described this, "sight of first love", you composed a beautiful love poem, It was so real, so heart felt, absolutely wonderful. I have heard opposites attract, I have heard that sometimes a person with a heart of gold tames the savage in another. This I do believe. You, my friend, have protrayed this love ever so gentle, warm, and a blessed happening. An awakening so to speak.

I absolutely love this. It will go in my favorites, I read it over and over again, It is an outstanding poem.

[Pebbles]

I love this so much thankyou for sharing :) and yep i read all the way through it was beautiful

[sarah]

this is a poem full of truth honesty and devotion I really really liked this great work

[Caradoc]

Very nice. A heartfelt poem with almost no embellishment. It's just raw, honest truth. I could say things like she must be very special, yadda yadda yadda, but the poem speaks for me; things that you already know. So treat her well and your kindness to her will be repaid a thousand times over. Such is the way of love. It is a lesson I have learned well for I have a light in my life as well.

Good job. May you and Drey have many, long, happy years together.

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime we get lucky. When you find something good. Hold on as long as you can. A old man who wished he knew what was important 35 years ago. I like the story in this poem. Luck and good timing is needed for two people to find and calm and peace in a life. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Jane Doe]

It's beautiful if I were drey I would absolutely love it
Even me not being drey I still love it
She's very kind she seems as though what people say I am an old soul she's kind but she knows others boundaries so far that's what I have noticed:)
She's one of a kind
Y'all seem perfect together
Loved it
Love y'all both(as friendsXD)
Xoxoxoxo
~abbie
100/100