Just Some Words

Some people believe in love at first sight

well what about sight of first love?

First true love I mean.

I've gone my whole life trying

just trying to be a nice guy,

but so far its just been that ole cliche line

"nice guys finish last". 

I've been used, cheated on, lied to

basically everything you can imagine. 

Then I met her.

Those perfect ice blue eyes,

five little black freckles in her iris.

Those eyes that could look through my stone walls

to see the broken man on the inside.

I would think to myself

should I be this happy,

I don't deserve this.

My past is that of rebellion

a lost cause who was addicted to drugs,

a suicidal drop out failure.

She was the opposite.

Graduated from school with honors,

no cutting, no drugs, 

perfect.

Why should I be so happy

I would ask myself that over and over.

I liked her from the first day I saw her,

standing there in the doorway,

a small smile on her face.

The first time I held her in my arms I knew.

Some people believe in love at first sight

well what about sight of first love?

First true love I mean.

What we have is different,

it feels real.

I have never felt this trust,

never felt what I'm feeling right now.

I've never been able to trust anybody before,

but for some reason it's different with her,

I trust her with my life.

I know

she would never do anything to hurt me,

I can feel her love upon me.

When her heart beats against mine

everything else in the world melts away,

leaving just her and I

there in that moment,

that one perfect moment.

My heart may be

tattered and bruised,

scarred and cracked,

but it's hers now.

I don't have to tell her to treat it right

because I know she will.

I Love Her.

Author's Note

Just writing about what is on my heart. I know I kinda went on a rant but I needed to keep going with it. Just had to get it out. Into the universe I guess you could say. If you read all the way through it, I thank you.

Reviews

[RJM]

Beautiful. I can relate to you in some parts my friend and really it just boils down to the fact that you love someone and they love you too. Great poem very beautiful.

[Winters_Lost_Walk]

=]] beautiful writing!!! it's amazing how love is eh..=)

[stars are far]

this was really enjoyable and great
you did an amazing work over here :)

[Liz]

I really enjoyed this :) I can totally relate to finding a love that is real :) I found mine a year ago, and we just got married 2 weeks ago :)

Anyways, this is beautiful. Hold onto her :)

[Tainted Devotion]

I really loved this. You are a very amazing writer. This was beautiful.

[Orahemae December]

Wonder writing. Thanks for sharing it with us.

[dream land]

i really liked it and you are a really good writer

[Valentine]

Sounds like the feelings of having found the right one..we look for love...other times love finds us..Valentine

[Carrion.]

beautiful.

[SinnerInspired]

So F*****g Sweet:D