Beneath These Ashen Stars

Lay your head upon my chest

and listen to my heart,

feel it beat with yours.

The soft touch 

blissful,

perfect,

and real.

Your fingers,

dance against my palm.

My head,

resting softly on your shoulder.

I look into my heart

and see your ice blue eyes,

looking deep into who I am. 

Thank you for caring

to break down my walls,

to see passed the mask I wear.

To you I give my trust

reaching out my open arms,

take me by the hand

beneath these ashen stars.

Reviews

[Winters_Lost_Walk]

The simplest things, mean the world with the person you love. And the feeling is unbelievably comforting. I love this writing, it shows out the simplicity of love, yet how easy it makes us break down our walls =)

[Orahemae December]

Thank u for sharing this. We all want that person we can tryst entirely. This is a great example of what we all want.

[Carrion.]

ashen stars can mean alot of things.
Honestly, I love it. The whole moving the words around, making a piece of artwork. Both in sight and in mind.
Good job:)

[Gilbert Saint]

Just asking, what's the meaning of ashen tears? But I loved the poem.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem of love and desire. I like the kind words bringing the emotion of love and thankfulness to this poem. A strong ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Calypso]

Ah so sweet

[.:Arianna:.]

Bewildering, how you fully throw your trust, which is such a treasure to all of us, into someone. I loved it, it is honest, soft and it carries the reader away. Great write!

[stars are far]

This was beautiful and really nice feelings ..

[Tasha]

This was a beautiful poem with a powerful message.
It's good to be with someone where you're not afraid to take off your mask.
Well done!
♥ Ta'Shandra

[A Risen Heroine.]

This is a beautiful poem!
I like it a lot, I'm happy you found someone you can take off your mask for (:
Very Well done!!

~A Fallen Heroine~