Falling

I'm falling like the sun

with every breath of you,

like the stars that fill your eyes

and dreams that echo true.

Reviews

[Jibin]

Beautiful, just a romantic touch.. felt it.... !

[sarah]

this is so romantic! awwwww great write

[Calypso]

Full of beauty and adoration.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Oh my goodness! This is absolutely beautiful!

[DreyaArt]

awe this is purty :) ur very good at writing simple and to the point very nice keep writing :)

[stars are far]

WOW
this is amazing short but to the point ..
great one .. nice shot ;)