Falling

I'm falling like the sun

with every breath of you,

like the stars that fill your eyes

and dreams that echo true.

Reviews

[Carrion.]

This is sweet and beautiful.
I love it.(:

[Gilbert Saint]

Its the best thing about short things, they are precise and deliver the message.

[StarryNights]

Short but descriptive :) It's quite well done!

[Caradoc]

It seems very incomplete to me.

[Coyote Poetry]

Wow. A amazing poem in so few words. You create a good vision in 22 words. The poem is beautiful and the description outstanding. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Tasha]

Short but so beautiful.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[SinnerInspired]

Short yet awesome~

[Rae]

Short and sweet. Keep writing!!

[Becky C Strukamp]

romantic, beautiful, excellent.

[Lily Mae]

Oh, this is sweet.. I fell into your words willingly:) xxx