A New Day Rising (Eternal Amorous)

Stand atop the world with me

and take my broken heart,

heal the scars the past has left

to piece in back to part. 

Sit with me as skies crash down

like the waters from a fall,

I lay here now, incomplete

 but for you I'll give my all.

Reviews

[stars are far]

This is amazing i really loved that and i think that it could be sang like i sang it aloud and it was rhyming with me :)
great piece :)

[A Risen Heroine.]

This piece left me breathless...
I love this piece!

~A Fallen Heroine~

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the feel and the desire of this poem. Sometime we must give more to show the people we want. How important they are. I like the strong ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[FallenHeroXx]

Left me breathless...

[Tasha]

I loved this!! It was so beautiful, especially the end. It was a wonderful write that many can relate too.
♥ Ta'Shandra