Pistanthrophobia

Very short, semi abstract poem.

Tranquil worlds ablaze

solar flares of ocean tide,

the pulse beneath obscurity

is the dark where angels die. 

Author's Note

This can mean anything. Re read it. What does it mean to you? I know exactly what this poem means to me, but what about to you. Give me some feed back.

Reviews

[Sukriti Suki]

Interesting...Very interesting. I read this many times and kept pondering, each time a new dimension came up. I am still thinking as I decide to write this review. When what is known and constant doesn't make sense anymore, cannot be trusted anymore, the unknown even perhaps obscure gives solace.

I will be thinking about these words for many days to come. Very deep write. Thanks for sharing.

[Lily Mae]

For me the use of the solar flares and ocean tide...all elements of anger representing the fall of the angel.... I love it..very interesting for sure..xx

[Pebbles]

This is how i feel right now ...read my last write fallen angels you may see why :)
love this ...

[Calypso]

Wow I'm really going to have to think about this one.
A part of me wants to believe this poem is about how fear of people can hurt you, while on the other hand I see the reason why people should be feared.
All I really know is that you have created art.

[.:Arianna:.]

I love the contrasts you present here, very powerful and brilliantly put in such a short write.

[Tainted Devotion]

The world coming to some kind of abrupt and disturbing stop. But some kind of re-newing of the world as well.

[Becky C Strukamp]

The world in turmoil, and the answers lie within ourselves.

[Carrion.]

o.e at first I didn't understand the first few words, So my first guess was when person really good ends up darked by scars and memorys, filled with remorse.
But when I looked up the words,
two pepole met, their worlds different. something bad happens. perhaps a fight or argument to the extreme, the person they thought they new stands before them, and your not sure you even know who they are...

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

very thought provoking. I am thinking the world is in chaos and the solution is being hidden from sight.

[GlamGirl]

The world is dark, but we will keep on surviving. Great poem, it definitely makes you think a LOT!!!