Pistanthrophobia

Very short, semi abstract poem.

Tranquil worlds ablaze

solar flares of ocean tide,

the pulse beneath obscurity

is the dark where angels die. 

Author's Note

This can mean anything. Re read it. What does it mean to you? I know exactly what this poem means to me, but what about to you. Give me some feed back.

Reviews

[Sukriti Suki]

Interesting...Very interesting. I read this many times and kept pondering, each time a new dimension came up. I am still thinking as I decide to write this review. When what is known and constant doesn't make sense anymore, cannot be trusted anymore, the unknown even perhaps obscure gives solace.

I will be thinking about these words for many days to come. Very deep write. Thanks for sharing.

[Dahlia Phoenix]

I must add to favorites! Incredible word choice man. I don't know what kind of meaning this poem has toward me but I guess that's the mystery of it. Excellent work indeed.

[Caradoc]

Sucks to be those angels.

[Stella]

The title is what attracted to this poem and I had to re read the poem several times each time I get a new meaning to it. I still don't know what to make of it but at first I thought this poem was about hell then I thought it was about the end of the world aka 2012. I'm still not sure though I'd probably have to ponder over the meaning a couple times more .

[SinnerInspired]

Holy S**t!
This is good

[DreyaArt]

interesting.

[ShadowOfTheDay]

Wow so short but soo good :)

[The Concealed Prince]

Four lines. Very interesting...I love it. :)

[AchingAlexandra]

It means to me that words can cause great rippling in the very notion of people themselves . That words can make people feel different things all together . And that because people use those words for darkness , it kills the good use of the words .
But that's just me ^^

[FallenHeroXx]

What this means to me?
This is everythin i live for..
Trying to save the tranquil world man..
And in my life..
I'm the pulse beneath all the ugliness and obscurity...
I'm what kills the angels..
This means a fuckload to me..

[Alskar]

Well, the first thing I get is that each line is a contrast. It seems to me to be a terribly angry person suddenly becoming nothing, ignored by society. At first, they are mad about this, but then they welcome the idea of being alone for a moment. Then the final line suggests to me that either the person has died in some way from this alienation, or they have fully accepted it and have themselves become dark.