Creepers

Annoying people trying to hit on you?

Creeper me this

and creeper me that

why must you stare

stare from the black. 

Where are your friends

where is your life,

why must you cause

cause me this strife. 

Don't tell me I'm perfect

don't tell me I'm great,

you don't even know me 

don't say that it's fate. 

You're half my own age

and you act to the part,

why don't you go 

before I tear you apart. 

Stick to your friends

or stick to your knife,

what ever your choice 

stay out of my life. 

Author's Note

If you have creepers that wont don't seem to ever leave you alone, read request this to all your friends and lets see if we can get the message across to the people of writerscafe.

Reviews

[Dewella~Vintella]

This was perfectly done. XD I think it gets the message off perfectly, especially "Stick to your friend, or stick to your life."

It had the edgy feel of telling someone to get lost, and also the annoyance and insult that comes with the aspect. Perfect perfect, is all I have to say. ^^

Vinny~

[Tasha]

You've definitely set the record straight, this came out perfectly. Creepers are very annoying but luckily I haven't met any on wc. Great write with so much meaning.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[Coyote Poetry]

I haven't met any creepers on this site. Good to be old and ugly. Sometime we must tell people. This is a writing site. My line to any strange request. "I'm a tire man with a mean wife and four kids. I'm here to read and write." A very interesting poem. The good part is this is the internet and we need not give out personal information. A excellent poem. Gave me something to think about.
Coyote

[Marie Harrison]

This poem drove home your message well!
Well done!

[Daydreamer54]

I love this. it's errie and it has an awesome flow like a song. great write!

[Inyourshadow]

sometimes it is the older ones hitting on us lol, not half as creepy as the youngsters though, I hear you and hope that your message reaches the ears of it's intended. Keep em' coming

[FemmeSpookyCorpse]

I love this...it's like a slap in the face...a giant middle finger, if you will, to all people out in society like that. Your descriptions and flow were great as well! An all around wonderful piece!

-Femme_Gothique (Brittany)

[donny ingraham]

Well written, there seems to be truth within this poem. We all have that one person that won't leave us alone.

[Jeremy Baker]

This is a feeling I can certainly relate to; like with internet trolls. Well written, good use of repetition and a killa final stanza. Good job.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I get some really strange messages here and in some other areas, but strangeness does seem to dwell in many areas here at the WC

[Carrion.]

love this. magnifecnt piece.