The Mouse and the Liar

This critical time echoes, dogs bark at the air

invading my thoughts, down the bottle I stare,

enchanted they dance, a fistful of fire

roses blood red, the mouse and the liar. 

A moments soft whisper, the person portrays

do I bow to a ruler when my thoughts are ablaze,

where is the passion, through glasses I see

blocked by a window from answers I seek.

To dream the outside, to survive through this life

sooth all the pain, the chips and the strife. 

Author's Note

I wrote this from 2 completely different lists of 10 words each from 2 different friends. Vin Rutilia and my other friend Tammy.

Reviews

[Dewella~Vintella]

You did a great job considering you had to start over....twice. XD.

Again, your seems so much better than mine...More elegant, I guess, poetic and enchanting. Wonderful job. *Tips hat to you*

Vinny~