The Mouse and the Liar

This critical time echoes, dogs bark at the air

invading my thoughts, down the bottle I stare,

enchanted they dance, a fistful of fire

roses blood red, the mouse and the liar. 

A moments soft whisper, the person portrays

do I bow to a ruler when my thoughts are ablaze,

where is the passion, through glasses I see

blocked by a window from answers I seek.

To dream the outside, to survive through this life

sooth all the pain, the chips and the strife. 

Author's Note

I wrote this from 2 completely different lists of 10 words each from 2 different friends. Vin Rutilia and my other friend Tammy.

Reviews

[Carrion.]

:O epic piece.

[SamBug]

I enjoyed this a lot!

[SinnerInspired]

Cool& powerful

[Tainted Devotion]

Loved it. :) Excellent flow and the rhyme scheme was perfect. Keep it up.

[Becky C Strukamp]

You did an amazing job. Very well penned.

[donny ingraham]

easy to follow, grat poem

[Rae]

This is awesome! Love the flow, love the rhyme, keep on writing!

[Thea]

Outstanding flow! :)))

[stars are far]

love the rhyme :)
great work :)

[Tom Chan]

it's really good :) love the way you rhyme it.