Watch You Bleed

Raise your weapon to the sky 

your thoughts that make the broken die, 

words that cut like razor blades 

but for you I will never cry. 

Your mass destructive temperament 

and living with such malcontent,

make me want to watch you bleed

so why'd you push to this extent.

Remember when I moved in you

when you said you loved me too,

f**k your lies and hazel eyes

these empty years I can't undo. 

Crimson skies will fade to grey 

while they watch your skin decay,

piece by piece, erased by time

hear the words I have to say. 

Author's Note

A poem I wrote a few months ago that I never posted for reasons I'd rather not say. Decided to put it up now that I dont have to worry about things anymore.

Reviews

[Desmund Tiny]

I like this poem, very emotional and I can relate to this kind of feeling. ^^,

[Dewella~Vintella]

Very emotional and dark. The feeling of betrayal is clear and cuts vivid imagery through out the entire piece.

Wonderfully written, gave me chills.

Vinny~

[stars are far]

this is so great and if it is wrote for someone it will stick like a thorn in his/her heart ...
well written and greatly expressed :)