Watch You Bleed

Raise your weapon to the sky 

your thoughts that make the broken die, 

words that cut like razor blades 

but for you I will never cry. 

Your mass destructive temperament 

and living with such malcontent,

make me want to watch you bleed

so why'd you push to this extent.

Remember when I moved in you

when you said you loved me too,

f**k your lies and hazel eyes

these empty years I can't undo. 

Crimson skies will fade to grey 

while they watch your skin decay,

piece by piece, erased by time

hear the words I have to say. 

Author's Note

A poem I wrote a few months ago that I never posted for reasons I'd rather not say. Decided to put it up now that I dont have to worry about things anymore.

Reviews

[GlamGirl]

This is really good and has a lot of strong emotion. great write!

[Carrion.]

very deep emotions. It sounds like you were used..
Very good write. I enjoy reading your poetry.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Excellent penning of emotions, tremendously excellent!

[Tainted Devotion]

And you will never have to say why you didn't post this. But you did a stunning job. I can feel the intensity of the emotions in this poem. You have such a deep mind and heart, and it really shows in your writing. This is one of my new favorites most certainly.

[alexis]

hey.that is very good and deep.im thinking i know why u didnt post it.but thats between u and me on messaging.the emotion is clearly seen between the lines.very good job with this

[FemmeSpookyCorpse]

I love this piece! It is not one to be messed with, since the emotion is so strong. Your descriptions are powerful and dark, wonderous and passionate! Well done = ]

-Femme_Gothique (Brittany)

[nevermindfan1991]

Amazing aggressive poem full of emotion. Not too bogged down by details. Great Job!

[Becky C Strukamp]

I sense the rage, the betrayal, you penned these emotions well. Excellent.

[FallenHeroXx]

This is really an excellent piece. Apathetic on one side, empathic on another, sick and twisted bro. So brilliant, i really dig this s**t man! Keep it up friend!

[A Risen Heroine.]

This is amazing!
I can relate to the feeling of being betrayed...
It's very emotional and raw..
Keep up the amazing work!!

~A Fallen Heroine~