Watch You Bleed

Raise your weapon to the sky 

your thoughts that make the broken die, 

words that cut like razor blades 

but for you I will never cry. 

Your mass destructive temperament 

and living with such malcontent,

make me want to watch you bleed

so why'd you push to this extent.

Remember when I moved in you

when you said you loved me too,

f**k your lies and hazel eyes

these empty years I can't undo. 

Crimson skies will fade to grey 

while they watch your skin decay,

piece by piece, erased by time

hear the words I have to say. 

Author's Note

A poem I wrote a few months ago that I never posted for reasons I'd rather not say. Decided to put it up now that I dont have to worry about things anymore.

Reviews

[SinnerInspired]

You really kno how to catch a writers attention its good:)

[DreyaArt]

beautifully terrifying thanks for writing

[Veritatis Cupitor]

"Crimson skies will fade to grey...... "

So much pain in each line. Pain that hides behind such anger and rage..
and with this , a need and desire to want to hurt who've hurt you, who've stolen time away from your life , taken your heart but never given theirs in return. ..
i enjoyed the power in your words with this one. nice job

[Coyote Poetry]

Some anger put us to the same level of the people who hurt us. We will desire pain for the one who left us. In the end. Best to walk away and leave the garbage for someone else. A powerful poem with a strong ending.
"Crimson skies will fade to grey
while they watch your skin decay,
piece by piece, erased by time
hear the words I have to say. "
Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Sleeping Maiden]

Wow. Such a powerful write! Magnificient... so intense. I just love how its written! Great job! =D

[Gilbert Saint]

is it war against someone or what? but anyway, its cool, great if it had mixed emotions rather than one emotion all the way.

[donny ingraham]

Strong words, it sounds as if you were going through a breakup

[Lily Mae]

"Remember when I moved in you
when you said you loved me too,
f**k your lies and hazel eyes
these empty years I can't undo."

Very powerful write.. you expressed your emotions very well..xx :)

[Rae]

Very intense, very dark. I enjoyed it. Keep writing.