Tears of No Concern

Some may find this disturbing to read. Not for the young. Like all my others, just a broken heart talking.

What the f**k is going on

with every f*****g day,

shadows kill whats left of life

to let our souls decay. 

Stabbed to trees, our broken hearts

drip blood beneath the night,

cleaved from chests, our lifeless corpse 

hang while flames burn bright. 

Twisted souls run under wood

on which these bodies sway,

laughing as their blood rains down

from chests where hearts astray.

Little kids are crying now 

as they watch their parents burn,

drops of flesh fall to the ground

like tears of no concern. 

Daddy daddy where'd you go

a boy calls from the smoke, 

limping through the red stained grass

beneath this burning oak. 

Drops of blood and melted skin

fall like autumns rain, 

black smoke blocks the moonlight glow

so darkness overcame. 

Reviews

[Chelsea.]

Filled with amazing detail, great wording, and is a little disturbing. But hey, those are the best ones right? Wonderful write.

[SamBug]

really good imagery here. I like your style. Great write.

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem with a real story in the words. It is important for all of us to be kind to friends and family. The world can be a pain in the a*s. I like the way you described the pain of living and trying to overcome the darkness. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Martina]

This is so hard to read, yet so beautiful at the same time.

[Tainted Devotion]

I've always loved reading your work, and this would be no different. You have the guts unlike most writers to write about what others would rather avoid. There is such a deepness to your writing and such a great mass of emotions. Wonderfully done. Amazing as usual. :)

[donny ingraham]

You're deep in ways most writers are not saying things that writers won't. Well expressed, and plus I can relate to this poem

[Sabrina Demartini]

Wow. I can relat to this when i was younger atleast.
great write!

[Miss World]

I loved this. I could relate soo much.
F*****g awesome poem

[A Risen Heroine.]

Wow...
I really like this poem...
I can relate...
You did such an amazing job on this!!
Keep up the good work and thank you so for the RR.

~A Fallen Heroine~