WTF Randomness

WTF Randomness

A Poem by LivingDeath
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Inspired by Solitary Dreamer's poem Gummy Bears :) Credit to them for their ideas. Link in authors note.

"
Gummy bears are chasing me
through these bouncy gummy streets,
the look of death is in their eyes
as they fall from rainbow skies.

The green one starts to laugh at me
the clear ones here but I can't see,
now I'm running for my life
because the red one has a knife. 

The orange ones cuffed onto a bed
a ginger joke that must be said,
I'm sorry babe I had to say
and to the rest, I bid good day.

© 2011 LivingDeath


Author's Note

LivingDeath
Inspired by Solitary Dreamer's poem Gummy Bears :) Credit to them for their ideas. Check it out http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Rebel-Vampire/757524/

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I must say , this poem made me think of Katy Perry's california girl video .

Posted 13 Years Ago


This was such an entertaining poem:) loved the gummy bears. Well done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Lol, this was awesome and it made me smile. :D Did you know if you lick gummy bears they stick to your forehead? It's really cool, lol. :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


It's the clear ones that scare me the most ;) xx I love it..xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Haha! Very creative! My friends and I have a little inside joke about gummy bears, so it makes it a lot more funny :D lol

Posted 13 Years Ago



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LivingDeath

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