WTF Randomness

Inspired by Solitary Dreamer's poem Gummy Bears :) Credit to them for their ideas. Link in authors note.

Gummy bears are chasing me

through these bouncy gummy streets,

the look of death is in their eyes

as they fall from rainbow skies.

The green one starts to laugh at me

the clear ones here but I can't see,

now I'm running for my life

because the red one has a knife. 

The orange ones cuffed onto a bed

a ginger joke that must be said,

I'm sorry babe I had to say

and to the rest, I bid good day.

Author's Note

Inspired by Solitary Dreamer's poem Gummy Bears :) Credit to them for their ideas. Check it out http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Rebel-Vampire/757524/

Reviews

[Winters_Lost_Walk]

haha loving the randomness ^^

[stars are far]

nice ..

[Calypso]

Sounds like a nightmare to me, and an fun one too! Gummy bears, a new kind of evil.

[Rae]

All I can say is good job dude, keep writing!

[StarryNights]

This is quite different, in a good way of course. Although now I might have a new perspective on gummy bears ;)

[Joshua Donahue]

This definitely reminded me of those quirky ,yet hilarious, Sour Patch candy commercials. This poem was amusing, but it felt like it could have had a serious tone in it. Either way it was interpreted, this was a great read! :))

[Sabrina Demartini]

Hahaha nice

HAHAHAHAHAHA nice.

[Blue tailed kite]

This was a good write, this makes me think that sometimes even harmless gummy bears can inspire mysterious and thrilling poems :)

[DearSweetAgony]

I don't think that this poem is exactly "WTF Randomness" it's not that random actually.
But the poem is amazing, I could feel those damn gummy bears after me.
This is a wonderful write..Keep it up!