Over The Hills of Greens and Grass

Over the hills of greens and grass

Night stars above the seas of glass,

Emit a glow perpetuous

Darkness fades for loves caress.

Atop the mountains peak so high

Yet through the clouds above we fly,

Where time is but a ray of light

Entitled by nights last goodbye.

Lakes reflect the souls untrue

Like the voice inside of you,

But forever will I hold you close

Eternal I will follow true.

Think of me as bees buzz by

Over the hills where preachers cry,

Go to where my voice is heard

Escape the pain and never die.

Through the rivers of your soul

Hear me now or never know,

Escape the tears of yesteryears

Run with me and let love grow.

Author's Note

An Acrostic

Reviews

[DreyaArt]

so pretty! you really are a great romantic poet :)
With such skill in words you weave such webs of beauty, that make my soul happy :)
Thank you for writing this.
Drey

[Valentine]

Your words flow so well in this ppoem..one just seems to flow with the wind while reading it..Very well done.Valentine

[Liza]

sensual movement - expressions shedding emotions onto imagery - a plentiful garden of thought provoking words...

[Liz]

You are really talented. This is amazing from the first line to the last. Excellent.

[Sukriti Suki]

Excellent...this is very good, from start to the end.

[Victoria]

This poem was fantastic! Thank you so much for sharing!!!

Excellent poem. I like the overall feel and subtle emotion of this. If I may suggest, the third stanza you use 'untrue' and three lines later 'true' In my reading that was the only spoiler. I would suggest changing one of them. Don't have to of course still works. Great job.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for the amazing poem. I had to read a few times. The words were beautiful and powerful. Description and story was very good. It was a pleasure to read this outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Bertie]

Wonderful imagery, it kind of reminds me of coleridge...Not sure why but it just does :)
I just wonder about 1 single line: "Think of me as bees buzz by"
It just seems slightly simple and possibly colloquial compared to the rest of the poem, I know you're capable of more.
But it's a tiny thing and I reiterate that this is a fabulous piece :)

[DearSweetAgony]

I love this poem.
You have a true gift with words.
I love the rhyme scheme,it was simply beautiful.
I thought that the title sounded interesting,but I clicked this poem thinking it would be one of those "O.K" poems.
Boy was I wrong,This write truely blew me out of the water.
I applaud your great job with this write.
Just wonderful.