One Day

Dedicated to everyone who has that one special person out there whether they be found or not found yet. If their shipped to abroad or living somewhere else. This ones for you.

One day we'll be rockstars

One day we'll be free,

One day we'll be artists 

And paint our life to be.

One day we'll walk hand in hand

One day I'll have you,

One day you will say my name

And I will say I do.

One day we will breath for once

One day we will feel,

One day we will know atlast

That what we feel is real.

One day we will break the rules

One day they will see,

One day I will hold you close

And baby you'll have me.

Reviews

[White Ink]

such a lovely hopeful poem.. love it :)

[stars are far]

i loved this a lot
and im waiting for this day too

[Valentine]

Terrific write and so true..If only people looked with their heearts instead of body lusts..Valentine

[Liz]

I am in love with this! I can relate SO much to this right now. This is very touching and powerful.

Favorite stanza:

"One day we'll walk hand in hand
One day I'll have you,
One day you will say my name
And I will say I do."

This made me smile, because my fiance is in boot camp right now and this cheered me up :) Thanks for sharing!

[Sukriti Suki]

Again a nice one..The repetition works very well and the emotion in the poem speaks. Enjoying your work.

[Victoria]

I liked the repetition in this! It was really creative and good. Thanks for sharing!

very sweet and yet has an underlying power to it. bring on those one days!

[Jibin]

Hopeful write, and i love the rhymes.
Great job dear friend...

[Coyote Poetry]

I'm looking for this Utopia too. Would be a good world to be free and do the things we desire. Music, writing and dancing would be the goal of the day. I like this poem. The poem remind me of the writers of the 1860-1880 A lot of dreams and no Government support. A good poem with a lot of hope. I like the ending to the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[E.V. Black]

All that we dare to be and more. Excellent piece.