One Little Spark

I wrote this in 1st person but not from my shoes. To be honest, my dads. Venting some things off my chest while expressing what he's going through.

I messed up bad 

and I broke your heart,

ignited this fire 

with one little spark.

I knew from the start

we we're meant to be,

now I'm alone

in this empty seat.

She was tempting me

and you had no clue,

broke every promise

that I ever made you.

Hurt me so much

when I looked in your eyes,

drowned in myself 

and all of my lies.

How can I go on

to live with myself,

alone in this room 

just screaming for help,

I deserve every pain

that I'm left here to feel,

never should of lied

but just kept it real.

Author's Note

Tell me what you think.

Reviews

[Miss Sally Sunshine]

It's a good poem, coming from a sad/bad place. The flow is nice, the emotion is there, and it's a great poem. It says a lot in so little words. Absolutely fabulous, great poem.