Read This If You're Hurt

if anyone else reading this is going through a tough time in their life and need someone to talk to, leave me a message and I'll help as best I can.

If no one else will listen

when all thats left is tears,

when you find it's hard to live

you know I'll still be here.

 

To hold you when you're down

and listen when you speak,

to make you strong again

when you're feeling weak.

 

If someone took your dreams

and broke your heart in two,

I'll bring my string and needles

and fix it till it's new.

 

I'll be here till the end

when theres no light left in days,

if you think you can't go on

I know we'll find our ways.

 

You don't deserve the s**t

when I know you're made of gold,

you can have my jacket

if your life is feeling cold.

 

None of us are angels

but we don't have to live in hell,

I'll help you to your feet

if you've ever fell.

 

If no one else will listen

when all thats left is tears,

when you find it's hard to live

you know I'll still be here.

 

I love you.

 

Reviews

[Alice In My Own Wonderl..]

This was great

[Liz]

Three words: love. love. LOVE.

This is amazing! I could feel the emotion reading every line. Beautifully written.

[Miss Sally Sunshine]

An amazing poem. I can tell that this person means a lot to you. This poems shows a ton of emotion, and the rhymes seem effortless. Great job. I love the meaning of the poem and the way it flows. Once again, great job.

[StarryNights]

The best kind of friend is one who is there when we need it, and the support for a friend is very much shown in your poem.

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. We need friends to pick us up when we fall and we must be there for them. I like the desire of kindness and concern in the words. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote