Seasons of Your Love

A poem I wrote for my girlfriend metaphorically describing her and our love as seasons. Because seasons are never ending, they will go on and on in time, just like I want our relationship to.

You are the world to me

though I know you'll never see,

the spark inside of you 

that burns yet never blue. 

Your hair is the summers breeze

that flow through my finger tips,

and smells of sweetest flowers

yet will never fall to bits.

Your eyes are the autumn leaves

subtle yet surreal,

alive with a burning glow

the softest touch, I cannot feel.

Your lips are a winters fire

soothing my shivering soul,

warming my heart with your spark inside

please don't ever go.

Your love is the warmth of spring

the start of something good,

the warmth before the heat

believe me if you could. 

You are the world to me

though I know you'll never see,

the spark inside that's true

baby I love you.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is amazing. I like the logic of your words. We must change like the season with love. We must bend and flex to make another happy. I believe it is worth the effort to see your love smile. Great description and a very good ending. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Jonathan De Elvira]

Wow,
you really are devoted to her...
wish you guys the best...
this was a good read for me..

[Brianna Brie]

Beautiful write! It is soft and gently with just enough spark to make it warm the soul.

[the in between]

Very beautiful words :) you described her ... just wow great job! im speechless haha my favorite was where you spoke of her lips :) vivid and sweet

[RJM]

You're girl is lucky to have you! Nice description of the emotions you have for her and the wise use of the seasons in describing how you feel. Very nice work.