Tears They Fall

The sun has set 

and will not rise,

these tears they fall

from blood shot eyes.

The frost has come

turned warm to cold,

the glimmering grass

and memories we hold.

Darkness surrounds

all that remains,

from smiles we shared

to cries of pain.

No stars will shine

the black abyss,

this is the end

I miss I miss.

Reviews

[Lovely Lady]

Great work. love the rhythm and the rhyme!

[Jonathan De Elvira]

nicely done..

[Lilly]

So sad but really beautiful writing. The flow and rhyme is lovely. Nice imagery too.

Great work here.