Tears They Fall

The sun has set 

and will not rise,

these tears they fall

from blood shot eyes.

The frost has come

turned warm to cold,

the glimmering grass

and memories we hold.

Darkness surrounds

all that remains,

from smiles we shared

to cries of pain.

No stars will shine

the black abyss,

this is the end

I miss I miss.

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I love this poem. It was extremely powerful and very well written. I love the flow of all the poems I've ever read by you. They are all emotional, but I do love this one. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Krista]

It is so powerful like many of your writings. I really don't know what else to say. I love all of yours that I have read. Keep on sending them!

[Valentine]

This was supurbly writtina nd the material drawing..Keep them coming..Kathie

[Theresa]

Another awesome poem with great flow and deep meaning.

[Blue]

Ha I love this! It flows so amazingly and I love the rhyme. Excellent job done :)


-Blue

[Felicity Winter]

Another great poem

[Liza]

lost hope
displaced faith
depth in darkness

[Bette]

good flow, well done and i agree with coyote that is my fav. lines too.

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is beautiful and sad. I like the words and story in your words.
"Darkness surrounds
all that remains,"
A very good ending to a excellent poem. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Tainted Devotion]

Very saddening and depressing. But it's written beautifully all the more. The flow and rhyme scheme work together in perfect union, without any sort of strain or conflict. Nicely done.