The Most Beautiful Composition

The Most Beautiful Composition

A Poem by LivingDeath
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To my Grandpa.. His condition is getting worse. His kidneys aren't filtering the toxins out of his body and now he is so weak he cant walk or eat, and any way to feed him leave him in worse shape.

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Don't leave the stage now
the curtains have yet to fall,
you can't leave us now
in the middle of your song.

Your song has touched us all
and made us who we are,
I love you with my life
forever near or far.

You showed me how to live
as you played that melody,
sang you words into my heart
you mean the world to me.

I remember little memories
from years that came and passed,
they make the biggest part of me
our love will always last.

The lyrics tell the tales of life
the most beautiful composition, 
notes that flow in harmony
portray a vivid vision.

So please don't leave the stage 
the curtains have yet to fall,
you can't leave us now
in the middle of your song.

© 2010 LivingDeath


Author's Note

LivingDeath
I love you grandpa, with all my heart. Please get better soon, I'm not ready to see you go.. I love you, I always will..

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Sad but so well said..I will be praying for your grand father.lol and God bless you and your family..Kathie

Posted 14 Years Ago


:(

Posted 14 Years Ago


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RJM
You're so lucky that you were able to write this for your grandpa! You should remember to tell him that you love him while you still have time. My biggest regret was I wasn't able to tell my grandpa how much I love him before he died. Hope he get's better

Posted 14 Years Ago


Sweet and so touching. May your heart heal with the thousand plus memories of a great influence in your life... love it.

~lovely

Posted 14 Years Ago


"You showed me how to live
as you played that melody,
sang you words into my heart
you mean the world to me.".....this was very deep and meaningful...I feel you man,
I hope he get better too.........

Posted 14 Years Ago


Awwh, this is beautiful
Hope he does well :/

Posted 14 Years Ago


awww. very sweet. you did good on this

Posted 14 Years Ago


An incredibly heartfelt poem. I love how you relate life to a performance/song - very effective. Beautiful piece.

Hope everything gets better...

Posted 14 Years Ago


very touching and well written, as always.
I hope your grandpa gets better :/

Posted 14 Years Ago


:( Ty, it'll be okay. I really hope your grandpa gets better. I'm sending good vibes. Remember I'm always here for you if you need to talk or anything.

Love Shen

Posted 14 Years Ago



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