The Most Beautiful Composition

To my Grandpa.. His condition is getting worse. His kidneys aren't filtering the toxins out of his body and now he is so weak he cant walk or eat, and any way to feed him leave him in worse shape.

Don't leave the stage now

the curtains have yet to fall,

you can't leave us now

in the middle of your song.

Your song has touched us all

and made us who we are,

I love you with my life

forever near or far.

You showed me how to live

as you played that melody,

sang you words into my heart

you mean the world to me.

I remember little memories

from years that came and passed,

they make the biggest part of me

our love will always last.

The lyrics tell the tales of life

the most beautiful composition, 

notes that flow in harmony

portray a vivid vision.

So please don't leave the stage 

the curtains have yet to fall,

you can't leave us now

in the middle of your song.

Author's Note

I love you grandpa, with all my heart. Please get better soon, I'm not ready to see you go.. I love you, I always will..

Reviews

[Valentine]

Sad but so well said..I will be praying for your grand father.lol and God bless you and your family..Kathie

[Liza]

:(

[RJM]

You're so lucky that you were able to write this for your grandpa! You should remember to tell him that you love him while you still have time. My biggest regret was I wasn't able to tell my grandpa how much I love him before he died. Hope he get's better

[Lovely Lady]

Sweet and so touching. May your heart heal with the thousand plus memories of a great influence in your life... love it.

~lovely

[Jonathan De Elvira]

"You showed me how to live
as you played that melody,
sang you words into my heart
you mean the world to me.".....this was very deep and meaningful...I feel you man,
I hope he get better too.........

[NeverShoutAlex]

Awwh, this is beautiful
Hope he does well :/

[Bette]

awww. very sweet. you did good on this

[Lilly]

An incredibly heartfelt poem. I love how you relate life to a performance/song - very effective. Beautiful piece.

Hope everything gets better...

[Chelsea.]

very touching and well written, as always.
I hope your grandpa gets better :/

[OtherWorldWoman]

:( Ty, it'll be okay. I really hope your grandpa gets better. I'm sending good vibes. Remember I'm always here for you if you need to talk or anything.

Love Shen