Love Life F****n Blows

To those "almost" exes... I've had it.

F**k this s**t

it happens every time

I just get hurt

when my heart's on the line.

It happened before her

and it happened again,

they said it was real

but they went with him. 

I don't care if this rhymes 

I don't care if it flows,

I don't care what you think

love life f****n blows.

It wasn't just her

this isn't the first,

I've given up

I just wanna burst.

I used to miss your voice

when I went a single day,

but now I don't want to hear

a word you have to say.

Author's Note

I know this is a shitty write.. I'm just venting.

Reviews

[Jane Doe]

I WIKE IT:!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:)

[.SaveSydney!.]

Pshh, "s****y write"?! Hell no.
This is really good; and I'm sure a lot of people can relate.
Love does suck sometimes; and it is frustrating when it doesn't work out. :/
Great poem though! :D you're a great writer. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

When disappointment takes over. We need to release the bad energy. Better on paper then to another. Words can do more damage then help sometimes. A strong poem of anger you have wrote.
Coyote

[♍ Kirstin ♎]

Sorry disagree with you. it's really good, you could probably get some lyrics going from this... 'Cause the way it read to me it was like it was the bassis of a song. It would rely on how you done it though (like I think it'd only work on a few genres so if you choose to try this be careful with what one you pick). Anyway this is a really good write.

[MusicMartyrs]

"I know this is a s****y write" i strongly disagree, i think it's very creative and relateable.

[Princy]

I'm with you man!
You have all the right to vent.
Darn, this must have been a fucked up feeling.
Be happy pal you deserve better.
Take care =)

[FeliciaS (Poetic Prince..]

Sorry you are having to go through this..what a crappy feeling!

[Fallacy Pharmacy]

This poem is not as bad you think; very strong, actually. Passionate and expressive, you deliver your emotions in words rather well.

I do agree with you... Partially.

[H-Jonesy]

nice vent i approve

I don't care if this rhymes
I don't care if it flows,
I don't care what you think
love life f****n blows.

that was awesome

[Senseless whatever]

You vent very well. Not a bad write at all. This is a complicated subject, we all go through it, we all have different experiences with it. If you want to discuss any of it feel free to email me. Focus on keeping you afloat.