Love Life F****n Blows

To those "almost" exes... I've had it.

F**k this s**t

it happens every time

I just get hurt

when my heart's on the line.

It happened before her

and it happened again,

they said it was real

but they went with him. 

I don't care if this rhymes 

I don't care if it flows,

I don't care what you think

love life f****n blows.

It wasn't just her

this isn't the first,

I've given up

I just wanna burst.

I used to miss your voice

when I went a single day,

but now I don't want to hear

a word you have to say.

Author's Note

I know this is a shitty write.. I'm just venting.

Reviews

[Moonflower]

Very expressive, and despite your refusal to care about the flow, it did so quite nicely

[Hush Hush]

S****y? Isn't it sometimes what poems are all about? Writing down our emotions? So I think you conveyed your anger through this poem really...strongly...nothing wrong with that. I actually like it's flow :)

[Liz Alexander]

It not bad. Some venting always works out in the end.

[Scarlet Pulse]

Actually I totally get what your saying!! I feel the same way. After a while you just get angry and frustrated and their voice becomes sickening. But sometimes is that underlying love for them and you miss them. Love sometimes sucks. LOL. good luck.

[Fran Marie]

used to miss your voice
when I went a single day,
but now I don't want to hear
a word you have to say

Well, a lot of anger within which needs to be vented
indeed; very well penned and deeply expressed~

Thanks for sharing

[Maria F. Rojas]

somehow i can relate to this when I was younger. I feel ya, great writing

[.]

nothing wrong with venting, better in verse than in the flesh! emotional and strong.

[.]

"I used to miss your voice
when I went a single day,
but now I don't want to hear
a word you have to say."

{dude--this is awesome--from the first to last verse--i love it my friend}

james:-)

[Lilly]

go ahead and vent - sometimes you just need to - and if venting doubles as a nice piece of writing - thats a bonus

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

It is good to vent every once in a while. I thought this was good either way. I have nothing bad to say about this. Thanks for sharing.