I Sit I Cry

To that someone close that died the other day. I'll always remember you.

Hold me down

my wings they cry,

I beg for you

to let me fly.

These dark bars

that hide all hope,

they hold me back

like unbreakable rope.

Give me peace

take my love,

I'm here below 

while you're above.

In the clouds

of heaven sky,

while you look down

I sit I cry.

Reviews

[Tainted Devotion]

Very touching and beautiful. Beautifully written and very inspiring. You truly have a gift in expressing just how you feel with your writing. Keep at it. And know that your loved ones are here for you in your time of need.....May you have peace soon....

[Undying Glory]

really beautiful and sad work. this is a really beautiful dedication to that someone, and at the same time a sobering reminder that life does not last forever, we should always treasure each other as we don't know when our time comes. awesome

[Sara Mercury]

And now ... so am I. Peace be with you in your time of grief. I know only too well how you feel...

[Lilly]

Really great poem. The emotion in this is so clear and gripping. The last stanza is especially powerful. Beautiful.

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this is pretty :]

[Coyote Poetry]

A sad and beautiful poem. The good people who we lose leave us yearning for their voice and company. The words are peaceful and very sad. A excellent poem.
Coyote