I Sit I Cry

To that someone close that died the other day. I'll always remember you.

Hold me down

my wings they cry,

I beg for you

to let me fly.

These dark bars

that hide all hope,

they hold me back

like unbreakable rope.

Give me peace

take my love,

I'm here below 

while you're above.

In the clouds

of heaven sky,

while you look down

I sit I cry.

Reviews

[Jessie]

Very moving and heartfelt, touches the very heart and soul thanks so much for sharing....tc.

[Senseless whatever]

Very touching poem. The visuals are perfect for this piece.

[*Evelen*]

This is really touching poem. It's beautiful and pain is felt through your words. Well done.

[Valentine]

This brought me thoughts of my parents up in Heaven..and yes I still car for them after all of these years..nice write..lol and God bless..Valentine

[MiidniightSoul]

A very beautiful poem and very touching. It is powerful and comes truly from the heart and soul. I love this.

[Maria F. Rojas]

awww, so touchy, so beautiful, love every word you wrote. great work!

[Beatles9322]

So beautiful and heartfelt. I hope you mourn in a healthy way. :D

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Very heartfelt. It reminds me of missing someone ...
Well written.

Chloe

[Margaret Madison Helms ..]

This is really taken from your heart... I can tell :) Really good!!

[thatbryngirl]

powerful and beautiful...sad tho.. very well done:)